Wednesday, 30 March 2011
Sunday, 20 March 2011
improvement on SCRIPT
After reading thoroughly through our script several times with my group we all desided that our script was unsatisfactory and therefore decided to improve it in order to make our film opening more successful.
In the school
Long SHOT
Geeky girl walking through corridor carrying books.
Straight cut
Close up shot
Mary
(Narration) Ok, that’s me over there, living and surviving the reality of a harsh planet, we all call “School.”
Straight cut
Medium shot
Where we are all fed from a golden fountain of knowledge. Yeah right! School is just a place where a jedi like myself cannot be with a guy like that leaving us to fight the most important battle in the world, loving someone who will never love you back.
Straight cut
Long shot
Straight cut
Medium shot
Maybe I am going a bit overboard or maybe I am not, but anyway my name is Mary Watkins and yes if you have’nt already guessed that I am utterly in love with scott… scott williams.
Straight cut
Close up shot
(Standing in a striking pose) Scott Williams is seen talking on the phone
Long shot
Straight cut
Mary is seen staring at Scott
Oliver walks down corridor and interrupts Mary day dreaming
Earth calling Mary, Earth to Mary, is it safe to land yet?
MARY
Do you come in peace and carry Scott Williams?
OlLIVER
I come with love and M&Ms will that do?
MARY
I guess it would be rude to say no.
Both characters laugh, Mary snorts.
Mary
OLIVER
Anyway, I’ll see you in science, Feel the force
Oliver holds up his hand
MARY
Feel the force
Mary holds up her hand
Close up shot
Both characters high five
Male voice
Shouts: heads up
Camera tilts to ceiling
Mary is seen looking up to the ceiling
Camera crane
High angle point of view shot
Mary falls to the ground
STRAIGHT CUT
CLOSE UP SHOT OF MARY ON THE GROUND
Low angle point of view show
Close up shot
Reaches out to Mary's hand
Camera zooms out
Medium shot
Let me help you up.
Beat
Straight cut
Medium low angle point of view shot
EXTREME CLOSE UP SHOT
low angle point of view shot of Mary
Long shot of Scott walking away
Straight cut
Medium shot of Mary
In the school
Long SHOT
Geeky girl walking through corridor carrying books.
Straight cut
Close up shot
Mary
(Narration) Ok, that’s me over there, living and surviving the reality of a harsh planet, we all call “School.”
Straight cut
Medium shot
Where we are all fed from a golden fountain of knowledge. Yeah right! School is just a place where a jedi like myself cannot be with a guy like that leaving us to fight the most important battle in the world, loving someone who will never love you back.
Straight cut
Long shot
Straight cut
Medium shot
Maybe I am going a bit overboard or maybe I am not, but anyway my name is Mary Watkins and yes if you have’nt already guessed that I am utterly in love with scott… scott williams.
Straight cut
Close up shot
(Standing in a striking pose) Scott Williams is seen talking on the phone
Long shot
Straight cut
Mary is seen staring at Scott
Oliver walks down corridor and interrupts Mary day dreaming
Earth calling Mary, Earth to Mary, is it safe to land yet?
MARY
Do you come in peace and carry Scott Williams?
OlLIVER
I come with love and M&Ms will that do?
MARY
I guess it would be rude to say no.
Both characters laugh, Mary snorts.
Mary
OLIVER
Anyway, I’ll see you in science, Feel the force
Oliver holds up his hand
MARY
Feel the force
Mary holds up her hand
Close up shot
Both characters high five
Male voice
Shouts: heads up
Camera tilts to ceiling
Mary is seen looking up to the ceiling
Camera crane
High angle point of view shot
Mary falls to the ground
STRAIGHT CUT
CLOSE UP SHOT OF MARY ON THE GROUND
Low angle point of view show
Close up shot
Reaches out to Mary's hand
Camera zooms out
Medium shot
Let me help you up.
Beat
Straight cut
Medium low angle point of view shot
EXTREME CLOSE UP SHOT
low angle point of view shot of Mary
Long shot of Scott walking away
Straight cut
Medium shot of Mary
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